Published by Every Day Fiction
Editor's comments
"It took a bit of time for this to grow on me, and it is quite hard reading, and not always clear at first glance what is going on; but there's a lot to this story, and the way it's written brings that out slowly over the course of the story. I like the way the whole thing's just a bit off-centre, and it does take a read-and-a-half to really get what it's all about. Skilled writing, and a lot of impact. This won't appeal to everyone, I feel like this is the kind of story people are either going to really like, or just not connect with at all."
A selection of reader responses
"Interesting story. I wonder if it counts as steampunk"
"I liked the feel of the story but I was very confused"
"To be honest, I wasn't really sure what was going on half the time"
"You understood half? Better man than I."
"Not an interesting enough story to re-read."
Enjoy.
everydayfiction.com/last-night-by-andrew-senior/
"It took a bit of time for this to grow on me, and it is quite hard reading, and not always clear at first glance what is going on; but there's a lot to this story, and the way it's written brings that out slowly over the course of the story. I like the way the whole thing's just a bit off-centre, and it does take a read-and-a-half to really get what it's all about. Skilled writing, and a lot of impact. This won't appeal to everyone, I feel like this is the kind of story people are either going to really like, or just not connect with at all."
A selection of reader responses
"Interesting story. I wonder if it counts as steampunk"
"I liked the feel of the story but I was very confused"
"To be honest, I wasn't really sure what was going on half the time"
"You understood half? Better man than I."
"Not an interesting enough story to re-read."
Enjoy.
everydayfiction.com/last-night-by-andrew-senior/